Pre-Draft 11

[Recordon, David]

Hi Prasanta,
That section shows as an example how to encode the two keys, mode and
error, in both Key-Value Form encoding as well as x-www-urlencoded
encoding as POST and GET arguments.  Thus when Key-Value encoding you
delimit between keys and values with a colon, though in url encoding you
use an equals sign just like other query string arguments.

What can we do to make that section more clear?

Thanks,
--David

-----Original Message-----
From: Prasanta Behera [mailto:pbehera at yahoo-inc.com] 
Sent: Tuesday, October 17, 2006 11:37 AM
To: Recordon, David; specs at openid.net
Subject: RE: Pre-Draft 11

The example in section 4.1.3 does not match.

mode:error
error:This is an example message

openid.mode=error&openid.err

Should it be openid.mode:error? (Ouch!)
I think "=" instead of ":" is better.

Thanks,
/Prasanta


-----Original Message-----
From: specs-bounces at openid.net [mailto:specs-bounces at openid.net] On
Behalf Of Recordon, David
Sent: Tuesday, October 17, 2006 3:24 AM
To: specs at openid.net
Subject: Pre-Draft 11

Over the past few days I've gone through and done a lot of cleanup on
the draft to add clarity and reword awkward paragraphs.  No actual
content changes should have been made between Draft 10 and this draft.
Figure this is a better benchmark when looking at the remaining
proposals than Draft 10.

--David