Comments on Auth 2.0 - Pre-Draft 11

[Johannes Ernst]

I think so. There seem to be enough changes I need to review a bigger  
chunk than I have time for right now.

On Dec 15, 2006, at 17:58, Johnny Bufu wrote:

> On 12-Dec-06, at 9:10 AM, Johannes Ernst wrote:
>
>>>>>> 11.2.2.2 Response Parameters
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Not clear which values MUST be present and which not.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Also:
>>>>>>
>>>>>> the language in this section is confusing. I don't quite
>>>>>> understand it. Not sure I can make a suggestion how to explain
>>>>>> it better, because so far I don' tunderstand it.
>>>
>>> I'll try to rephrase the three paragraphs in there. In the
>>> meantime, it would help if you could point what you found the most
>>> confusing.
>>
>> I'm just raising the "General Confusion Fault" ;-) That might just be
>> me, however.
>
> This is what I've come with for the "Verifying Directly with the  
> OpenID Provider" section; does it (start to) make sense?
>
> http://openid.net/svn/listing.php?repname=specifications&path=% 
> 2F&rev=236&sc=1
>
>
> Johnny