Comments on Auth 2.0 - Pre-Draft 11

[Joaquin Miller]

Thanks, Johnny.  Good points.

How about one of these:

    When a message is sent as a POST, OpenID parameters MUST be sent 
only in the POST body and the parameters processed MUST be only those 
from the POST body.

   When a message is sent as a POST, OpenID parameters MUST be sent 
only in and processed only from the POST body.

Instead of:

>When a message is sent as a POST, OpenID parameters MUST only be 
>sent in and processed from the POST body.

(I feel the first of the two alternative above captures the intention 
much better.  We are aiming to make each clause of this document 
clear for folks who don't already know what we have in mind, right?)

Cordially, Joaquin

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