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Hi Jörg,<br>
<br>
thanks for producing the new revision. Here are my comments:<br>
<br>
Abstract<br>
In my opinion, this section should focus on the intention of this
spec - profile OIDC authentication to the needs of MNOs. I would
suggest to move the iteration of the different features to the intro
section.<br>
<br>
Mobile Profile -> MODRNA Profile<br>
<br>
§1.2<br>
Please remove lonely "T" after the MSISDN definition <br>
<br>
§2 Overview<br>
What's the difference between Intro and Overview? I personaly think
§2 and §3 could be combined.<br>
<br>
§4<br>
<br>
"The acr_values reflect the level of assurance as specified in ISO
29115 [ISO.29115]." Would it make sense to more explicitely refer to
ISO 29115 for the actual definition of the LOAs?<br>
<br>
"A urn is used to be able to register to IANA." please refer to
respective registry.<br>
<br>
What do you mean by "actual methodologies"? Are you refering to
particular authentication methods?<br>
<br>
Def of loa2 says "Some confidence in the asserted identifier.",
whereas the intro of this sections states "Identity or claim
assurance is not included in this specification." Which way are we
pursuing for MODRNA?<br>
<br>
§5<br>
<br>
"the users OpenID Provider" -> "the user's OpenID Provider"<br>
<br>
I think the example contains one closing curly brace to much.<br>
<br>
§8<br>
<br>
We should discuss in the group whether account chooser support goes
to discovery or stays here. Independent of this discussion, I would
suggest to remove it from the current revision as account choose is
not in scope for delivery to GSMA.<br>
<br>
I think acr_values is currently the onle mandatory feature of this
spec.<br>
<br>
From my perspective, the big changes/extensions needed for delivery
by end of Nov are:<br>
<br>
- privacy and security considerations<br>
- context parameter spec<br>
- clean up of MTI section<br>
<br>
best regards,<br>
Torsten.<br>
<br>
<div class="moz-cite-prefix">Am 13.11.2015 um 11:00 schrieb
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