[Openid-specs-mobile-profile] Issue #110: CIBA: typos in draft 06 (openid/mobile)

Takahiko Kawasaki issues-reply at bitbucket.org
Wed Nov 7 06:01:30 UTC 2018


New issue 110: CIBA: typos in draft 06
https://bitbucket.org/openid/mobile/issues/110/ciba-typos-in-draft-06

Takahiko Kawasaki:

Typos in draft-mobile-client-initiated-backchannel-authentication-06 which was updated on Oct. 30, 2018.

p1, Title
```
(unless the lower case is intentional)
Client initiated ->
Client Initiated
```

p2, the 3rd paragraph
```
(unless the lower case is intentional)
Client initiated ->
Client Initiated
```

p2, the 4th paragraph
```
semantic ->
semantics
```

p3, the 1st line
```
semantic ->
semantics
```

p3, 2. Terminology, the 1st paragraph
```
the term "client" ->
the term "Client"
```
```
OAuth 2.0 Authentication Servers ->
OAuth 2.0 Authorization Servers
```

p3, 2. Terminology, Consumption Device
```
or the CD is a SP ->
or the CD is an SP
```

p4, 3., Ping Mode
```
a callback uri ->
a callback URI
```

p4, 3., Push Mode
```
a callback uri ->
a callback URI
```

p5, Client Metadata, backchannel_token_delivery_mode
```
Add a period at the end of the sentence.
```

p5, Polling and Pairwise Identifiers
```
ownership and it use it ->
ownership and uses it
```

p6, the 1st line
```
the client ->
the Client
```

p6, the 2nd paragraph, the 5th line
```
uri to set as a "sector_identifier_uri" ->
URI to set as a "sector_identifier_uri"
```

p6, the 3rd paragraph
```
one of this two mechanisms ->
one of the following two mechanisms
```

p8-p9, diagrams
```
- 'AD' should be centered in the box.
- The space after '(2) User interactions' should be removed.
```

p9, 7.1. Authentication Request, the 1st line
```
(unless the lower case is intentional)
Client initiated ->
Client Initiated
```

p10, acr_values
```
the Authorization Server ->
the OpenID Provider
```

p10, id_token_hint
```
by the authorization server ->
by the OpenID Provider
```

p11, the 2nd line
```
by the client ->
by the Client
```

p11, the 3rd line
```
the client MUST ->
the Client MUST
```

p11, the 3rd line
```
decrypt the signed ID Token contained within the encrypted ID Token ->
decrypt the encrypted ID Token to extract the signed ID Token contained in it.
```

p11, login_hint
```
A hint to the authorization server ->
A hint to the OpenID Provider
```
```
the client before ->
the Client before
```

p11, binding_message
```
a visual cue the end-user ->
a visual cue for the end-user
```

p11, the 2nd last paragraph
```
(unless the lower case is intentional)
Client initiated ->
Client Initiated
```

p12, 7.1.1., aud
```
must contain ->
MUST contain
```

p12, 7.1.1., iss
```
must be ->
MUST be
```

p14, 7.2.
```
Remove a redundant empty line between the first item and the second item.
```

p15, 5.
```
as per section ->
as per Section
```

p16, 8., the 2nd paragraph
```
As in OAuth2 ->
As in OAuth 2.0
```

p16, 8., the 3rd paragraph
```
(unless the lower case is intentional)
Client initiated ->
Client Initiated
```

p17, the 2nd paragraph
```
(unless the lower case is intentional)
Client initiated ->
Client Initiated
```

p17, 9., the 2nd paragraph
```
Client Notification Authentication Endpoint ->
Client Notification Endpoint
```

p17, 9., the 4th paragraph
```
id_token, access_token and, optionally, refresh token ->
ID Token, an Access Token and, optionally, a Refresh Token
```

p17, 10., the 2nd paragraph
```
A client ->
A Client
```

p17, 10.1.
```
If the Client registered ->
If the Client is registered
```

p18, the 4th paragraph
```
in Ping mode, may also ->
in Ping mode may also
```
```
as if was registered ->
as if it were registered
```

p21, the 1st line
```
a succesful token ->
a successful token
```

p23, the 4th paragraph
```
is like to ->
is likely to
```

p23, 11., the 1st paragraph
```
according to the section ->
according to Section
```

p23, 11., authorization_pending
```
the end-user ->
the End-User
```

p24, access_denied
```
The end user denied ->
The End-User denied
```

p24, the 4th paragraph
```
If the Client has registered ->
If the Client is registered
```

p25, the 2nd paragraph
```
the following two parameters ->
the following three parameters
```

p27, 15., the 3rd paragraph
```
id_token_hint is listed in the the ->
id_token_hint is listed in the
```
```
key rotation, however, the the OP ->
key rotation, however, the OP
```
```
a valid hint will likely be ->
a valid hint will be likely to be
```

p27, 16.
```
(unless the lower case is intentional)
Client initiated ->
Client Initiated
```

Appendix A., the 1st paragraph
```
This a non-normative ->
This is a non-normative
```




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