[Openid-specs-mobile-profile] Comments on authn spec

[Lodderstedt, Torsten]

Hi,

here are my comments:

1st paragraphs of sections 2 and 3 miss a '.'

Section 4

Description of mod-pr missing '.'
Description of mod-mf - replace ',' by '.'
"The OP MUST support receiving "acr" as a as a" - remove one occurrence of "as a"

Section 5,1

"If the authentication is by" - is there a "performed" missing?

Section 6.1

"TBD:..." Didn't we agree to replace this paragraph by reference to OpenID Connect Discovery spec

Section 9

First paragraph misses '.'

Kind regards,
Torsten.
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