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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">Hi all,</div>
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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">I create a pull request with proposed
      changes. Please review this carefully, as to not introduce
      unwanted German influence ;-)</div>
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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix"><a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="https://bitbucket.org/openid/fapi/pull-requests/232/html-version-feedback">https://bitbucket.org/openid/fapi/pull-requests/232/html-version-feedback</a><br>
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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">Besides this, I noticed the following:<br>
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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">- We reference X.1254 without using it
      in the text</div>
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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">- [ISO29134] and [ISO29184] (only Pt.
      2) are not rendered - I don't know what the expected syntax is, so
      I didn't touch this in my pull request.</div>
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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">- The indentation of the continuation
      of the enumerations looks strange, e.g., in Section 5.2.3. of Pt.
      1. I suppose this is a limitation of the tools we use (because we
      want to keep the enumeration running) but it would be great if we
      could fix this.</div>
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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">-Daniel<br>
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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">Am 27.01.21 um 12:21 schrieb Edmund Jay
      via Openid-specs-fapi:<br>
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        <div>Dear WG members,</div>
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        <div>Attached are the Final preview version of the rendered HTML
          of the FAPI Security Profile 1.0 Parts 1 and 2.</div>
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        <div>Your comments and feedback are much appreciated.</div>
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        <div>Thank you.</div>
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        <div>-- Edmund<br>
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