[Openid-specs-fapi] FAPI Security Profile 1.0 Parts 1 & 2 Final Preview

[Daniel Fett]

Hi all,

I create a pull request with proposed changes. Please review this
carefully, as to not introduce unwanted German influence ;-)

https://bitbucket.org/openid/fapi/pull-requests/232/html-version-feedback

Besides this, I noticed the following:

- We reference X.1254 without using it in the text

- [ISO29134] and [ISO29184] (only Pt. 2) are not rendered - I don't know
what the expected syntax is, so I didn't touch this in my pull request.

- The indentation of the continuation of the enumerations looks strange,
e.g., in Section 5.2.3. of Pt. 1. I suppose this is a limitation of the
tools we use (because we want to keep the enumeration running) but it
would be great if we could fix this.


-Daniel

Am 27.01.21 um 12:21 schrieb Edmund Jay via Openid-specs-fapi:
> Dear WG members,
>
> Attached are the Final preview version of the rendered HTML of the
> FAPI Security Profile 1.0 Parts 1 and 2.
>
> Your comments and feedback are much appreciated.
>
> Thank you.
>
> -- Edmund
>
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