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Thank you very much, David!</div>
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I created a PR #89 incorporating your feedback.</div>
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For what concretely I included in the PR, please see comments inline below.</div>
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All, please note that the latest editor's draft after removing the option to embed a VP in the ID Token has been published at: <a href="https://openid.bitbucket.io/connect/openid-connect-4-verifiable-presentations-1_0.html#name-metadata" id="LPNoLPOWALinkPreview" style="font-family: Calibri, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;">https://openid.bitbucket.io/connect/openid-connect-4-verifiable-presentations-1_0.html</a></div>
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Kindest Regards,</div>
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<div id="divRplyFwdMsg" dir="ltr"><font face="Calibri, sans-serif" color="#000000" style="font-size:11pt"><b>From:</b> Openid-specs-ab <openid-specs-ab-bounces@lists.openid.net> on behalf of David Chadwick via Openid-specs-ab <openid-specs-ab@lists.openid.net><br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, December 10, 2021 14:28<br>
<b>To:</b> Mike Jones <Michael.Jones@microsoft.com>; Artifact Binding/Connect Working Group <openid-specs-ab@lists.openid.net><br>
<b>Cc:</b> David Chadwick <d.w.chadwick@verifiablecredentials.info><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Openid-specs-ab] [EXTERNAL] Re: Working group reviews of OIDC4VP spec due Friday</font>
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<div class="x_moz-cite-prefix">Hi Mike</div>
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<div class="x_moz-cite-prefix">Section 6 first sentence. Verifiable credential -> verifiable presentation</div>
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-> <code>vp_formats</code> currently define format only the VP, so the current text is correct. We can extend it to define format of VCs, too. I made a text suggestion in the PR. please review.</div>
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Section 11. using claims parameter -> using the claims parameter</div>
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<div class="x_moz-cite-prefix">of Self-Issued -> of the Self-Issued</div>
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-> superceded by <span style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);display:inline !important">PR #79</span><br>
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<div class="x_moz-cite-prefix">Kind regards<br>
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<div class="x_moz-cite-prefix">On 10/12/2021 21:26 a, Mike Jones wrote:<br>
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<b>From:</b> David Chadwick <a class="x_moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:d.w.chadwick@verifiablecredentials.info">
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<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, December 8, 2021 1:22 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Artifact Binding/Connect Working Group <a class="x_moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:openid-specs-ab@lists.openid.net">
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<b>Subject:</b> [EXTERNAL] Re: [Openid-specs-ab] Working group reviews of OIDC4VP spec due Friday</p>
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As decided during the 2-Dec-21 call, the working group is requested to review the OpenID Connect for Verifiable Presentations specification at
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https://openid.net/specs/openid-connect-4-verifiable-presentations-1_0.html</a> and get review comments in by this Friday, December 10<sup>th</sup> in preparation for an OpenID Foundation-wide review of the specification as a proposed Implementer’s Draft.</p>
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