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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">Hi Mike</div>
<div class="moz-cite-prefix">Here are the Edits</div>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">Section 6 first sentence. Verifiable
credential -> verifiable presentation</div>
<div class="moz-cite-prefix">4th para Note that above claim->
Note that the above claim</div>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">Section 11. using claims parameter
-> using the claims parameter <br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">Section 11.1 returned inside ID Token
-> returned inside the ID Token <br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">of Self-Issued -> of the Self-Issued</div>
<div class="moz-cite-prefix">also contain verifiable_credentials
-> also contain the verifiable_credentials <br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">Section 11.1.1.1 presentations containg
a -> presentations containing a <br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">Section 11.1.2 that includes
verifiable_presentations claim ->that includes a
verifiable_presentations claim</div>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">Section 11.3 returned inside ID Token
-> returned inside the ID Token</div>
<div class="moz-cite-prefix">of Authorization Code flow. ID Token
-> of the Authorization Code flow. The ID Token <br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">Section 11.4 Below are the examples
when verifiable -> Below are examples when the verifiable <br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">as part of OpenID -> as part of the
OpenID <br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">UserInfo response -> The UserInfo
response</div>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">Kind regards<br>
David</div>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 10/12/2021 21:26 a, Mike Jones
wrote:<br>
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e-mail or as a pull request. Be sure that you’re basing your
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since many updates have already been using claims<br>
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Thanks,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b>From:</b> David Chadwick
<a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:d.w.chadwick@verifiablecredentials.info"><d.w.chadwick@verifiablecredentials.info></a>
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<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, December 8, 2021 1:22 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Artifact Binding/Connect Working Group
<a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:openid-specs-ab@lists.openid.net"><openid-specs-ab@lists.openid.net></a><br>
<b>Cc:</b> Mike Jones <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:Michael.Jones@microsoft.com"><Michael.Jones@microsoft.com></a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [EXTERNAL] Re: [Openid-specs-ab] Working
group reviews of OIDC4VP spec due Friday<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Hi Mike<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">I have done a review of OIDC4VP and the
only technical issue I have has been recorded in
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Neue";color:#172B4D;background:white">
Issue #1369</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">I also have a lot of grammatical changes
to suggest. What is the best way to deal with these?<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Kind regards<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">David<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On 07/12/2021 06:18, Mike Jones via
Openid-specs-ab wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">As decided during the 2-Dec-21 call, the
working group is requested to review the OpenID Connect for
Verifiable Presentations specification at
<a
href="https://openid.net/specs/openid-connect-4-verifiable-presentations-1_0.html"
moz-do-not-send="true" class="moz-txt-link-freetext">
https://openid.net/specs/openid-connect-4-verifiable-presentations-1_0.html</a>
and get review comments in by this Friday, December 10<sup>th</sup>
in preparation for an OpenID Foundation-wide review of the
specification as a proposed Implementer’s Draft.<o:p></o:p></p>
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-- Mike<o:p></o:p></p>
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