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Thank you, Tony! <span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;">A lot of good catches!</span></div>
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<span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;">I reflected most of the comments, and wanted to clarify two points.</span></div>
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<span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;">- End-user is in capital because this is the way it is written in the OpenID Connect Core.</span></div>
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<span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;">- I think we are using shall rather than will in the Annex contribution to ISO because that is the way to express requirements in ISO.</span></div>
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<span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;">Would you be ok with keeping End-users in capital and
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<span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;">Kindest Regards,</span></div>
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<span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;">Kristina</span></div>
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<b>送信日時:</b> 2021年6月15日 8:56<br>
<b>宛先:</b> 'Artifact Binding/Connect Working Group' <openid-specs-ab@lists.openid.net><br>
<b>CC:</b> Anthony Nadalin <nadalin@prodigy.net><br>
<b>件名:</b> Re: [Openid-specs-ab] DHS mDL RFI response from OpenID Foundation</font>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal"><b>From:</b> Openid-specs-ab <openid-specs-ab-bounces@lists.openid.net>
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Torsten Lodderstedt via Openid-specs-ab<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday, June 14, 2021 1:43 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> Artifact Binding/Connect Working Group <openid-specs-ab@lists.openid.net><br>
<b>Cc:</b> Torsten Lodderstedt <torsten@lodderstedt.net><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Openid-specs-ab] DHS mDL RFI response from OpenID Foundation</p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal">thanks for sharing the draft response. </p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal">Here are my comments:</p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal">- the example on p7 uses „verified_claims“ syntax, so it might be worthwhile mentioning OpenID Connect 4 Identity Assurance in the document</p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal">- section 7.1.3.4.4: how is the request sent from the reader to the SIOP? I’m asking since I thought those parties would live on different devices</p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal">- Generally: would it be possible to share more context with the WG? It seems like a lot of knowledge about ISO/IEC 18013-5 is required to understand the proposal</p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal">- typo on p2 2nd paragraph: "OpenII Connect“ -> OpenID Connect </p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal">best regards,</p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal">Torsten. </p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal">Am 14.06.2021 um 09:32 schrieb Kristina Yasuda via Openid-specs-ab <<a href="mailto:openid-specs-ab@lists.openid.net">openid-specs-ab@lists.openid.net</a>>:</p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt">As discussed during the last Connect WG call, circulating the draft response from OpenID Foundation to<span class="x_apple-converted-space"> </span><span style="color:black; background:white">DHS RFI on
mDL (mobile Driving License)</span>.</span></p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt">We wrote it with Tony and Tom Jones, and it has been reviewed by Gail, Mike and Nat.</span></p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt">If you have any comments please send them<span class="x_apple-converted-space"> </span><b><u>by June 16th</u></b><span class="x_apple-converted-space"> </span>to the ML, so that we have time to reflect them
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<p class="x_MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt">Apologies for circulating last minute. We can also discuss the questions and comments at tomorrow's Pacific Connect WG call.</span></p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt">Below are links to the original RFI from DHS:</span><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Helvetica",sans-serif"></span></p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt">- <a href="https://nam06.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.google.com%2Furl%3Fq%3Dhttps%3A%2F%2Fwww.govinfo.gov%2Fcontent%2Fpkg%2FFR-2021-04-19%2Fpdf%2F2021-07957.pdf%26source%3Dgmail-imap%26ust%3D1624260775000000%26usg%3DAOvVaw1aQ3sHxbIfB3aUEbHijNiu&data=04%7C01%7CKristina.Yasuda%40microsoft.com%7C2d4048e3590d43f0e0f408d930179583%7C72f988bf86f141af91ab2d7cd011db47%7C1%7C0%7C637593700629547029%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000&sdata=1v1Up241rKUk%2BTdy%2FANNYpchcVPm%2BsnO5TNjffZxZKo%3D&reserved=0" originalsrc="https://www.google.com/url?q=https://www.govinfo.gov/content/pkg/FR-2021-04-19/pdf/2021-07957.pdf&source=gmail-imap&ust=1624260775000000&usg=AOvVaw1aQ3sHxbIfB3aUEbHijNiu" shash="iupWaAtWb1umndQElJhHNnvlXWtV2Xxn+RiRFIpZT7tOwKGTRgJRATD4hGaeGuJA4MewKYaD1mi1PKfXOxOfPHvCWytKYY2Oi0HToe5Lp1sw3TDIXIsQPPe2bhPVwSjja8TE8XZh/o3TxZpZtwRF4Z5sfhmqxJUS8nQIj3ReTRg=">https://www.govinfo.gov/content/pkg/FR-2021-04-19/pdf/2021-07957.pdf</a></span><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Helvetica",sans-serif"></span></p>
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