<html><head><meta http-equiv="content-type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8"></head><body dir="auto"><div dir="ltr"></div><div dir="ltr">Hi Mike,</div><div dir="ltr"><br></div><div dir="ltr">thanks for your detailed review and substantial proposals. It will take some time to work through it. I will come back to you asap.</div><div dir="ltr"><br></div><div dir="ltr">Also note: I unfortunately cannot attend the call today.</div><div dir="ltr"><br></div><div dir="ltr">best regards,</div><div dir="ltr">Torsten.</div><div dir="ltr"><br>Am 01.06.2019 um 05:50 schrieb Mike Jones <<a href="mailto:Michael.Jones@microsoft.com">Michael.Jones@microsoft.com</a>>:<br><br></div><blockquote type="cite"><div dir="ltr">
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<p class="MsoNormal">I read <a href="https://openid.net/specs/openid-connect-unmet-authentication-requirements-1_0-00.html">
https://openid.net/specs/openid-connect-unmet-authentication-requirements-1_0-00.html</a> cover-to-cover. My review comments follow.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Document title: Add draft number.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Document identifier: Change from “openid-connect-core-unmet-authentication-requirements-1_0” to “openid-connect-unmet-authentication-requirements-1_0”.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">1. Authentication Error Definition: Add a reference to RFC 6749 to the first use of “OAuth 2.0”.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">1. Authentication Error Definition: Add a reference to [OpenID.Core] to the first use of “OpenID Connect Core”.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">1. Authentication Error Definition: Change “<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:black;background:white">imposed by the Relying Party regarding</span>” to “of the Relying Party for”. It will read more naturally
that way.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">1. Authentication Error Definition: Add a comma before “if appropriate”.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">3. Normative References: Add the URL <a href="https://www.iana.org/assignments/oauth-parameters/oauth-parameters.xhtml">
https://www.iana.org/assignments/oauth-parameters/oauth-parameters.xhtml</a> to the OAuth Parameters Registry reference.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">3. Normative References: Replace the OpenID.Core reference with:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"> <title>OpenID Connect Core 1.0</title><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"> <author fullname="Nat Sakimura" initials="N." surname="Sakimura"><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"> <author fullname="Michael B. Jones" initials="M.B." surname="Jones"><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"> <date day="8" month="November" year="2014"/><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Acknowledgments: Change “Mike Jones” to “Michael B. Jones”.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Document History: The version you are identifying as -01 was published as working group version -00. Please amend the history accordingly.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"> Thanks,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"> -- Mike<o:p></o:p></p>
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