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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Thanks, George. Comments applied at
<a href="http://openid.bitbucket.org/">http://openid.bitbucket.org/</a>.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">1.2 – Was previously deleted, since unnecessary and confusing.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">2 – Overly redundant – already spelled out earlier in the paragraph.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D"> -- Mike<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";color:windowtext">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";color:windowtext"> openid-specs-ab-bounces@lists.openid.net [mailto:openid-specs-ab-bounces@lists.openid.net]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>George Fletcher<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, October 31, 2013 1:24 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> openid-specs-ab@lists.openid.net<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [Openid-specs-ab] Review of Multiple Response Type Encoding Practices<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span style="font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif"">Section 1.2<br>
Client and Server --<br>
Editorial:<br>
"the client requests an access restricted resource (Protected Resource) on the server"
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recommend....<br>
"the client requests access to a restricted resource (Protected Resource) on the server"<br>
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Question: " by authenticating with the server using the Resource Owner's credentials."<br>
Are we trying to describe the pre-OAuth2 model? Or just that the client obtains authorization to access the Protected Resource often using the Resource Owner's credentials?<br>
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Section 2<br>
Should we explicitly spell out response_mode in the last sentence as in ... "if no Response Mode is specified using the 'response_mode' request parameter? Or is that overly redundant?<br>
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Section 2.1 : response_mode<br>
Second sentence: I find this a little confusing. Maybe... "The use of this parameter is NOT RECOMMENDED when the Response Mode value is the same as the default Response Mode value specified by the Response Type."<br>
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Section 2.2: second paragraph, first sentence<br>
"The all parameters" I think should be just "All parameters..."<br>
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Otherwise, looks good!<br>
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Thanks,<br>
George</span><br>
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