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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Responses inline<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> openid-specs-ab-bounces@lists.openid.net [mailto:openid-specs-ab-bounces@lists.openid.net]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Nat Sakimura<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, June 05, 2013 7:03 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> openid-specs-ab@lists.openid.net<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [Openid-specs-ab] Other specs Review<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b>Registration</b><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">I have not checked the consistency with the most recent version of OAuth Registration. <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">The normative identifiers are consistent. There may be some wording differences that we should reconcile in both directions.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">It has warning text about the relationship. If we are to announce that 2nd I-D is the stable one that will not change, we may want to remove the warning. <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">I think the warning should stay, as it’s reflective of our intent to use the OAuth Dynamic Registration spec if it stabilizes in time.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">At the very beginning, it is speaking of OAuth 2.0 protocol. IMHO, it should be replaced by its formal name: OAuth 2.0 Authorization Framework. This applies to all other documents. <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">This wording is intentional. “OAuth 2.0” actually refers to two documents – RFC 6749 and RFC 6750. Thus, replacing “OAuth 2.0”, which is a commonly understood
technical term, with a reference only to RFC 6749, would be incorrect. I have therefore not made this change in any document.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b>Basic and Implicit</b><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Some of the changes to Message undoubtedly need to be propagated here. <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">I have done so all the time when changing text that occurs in multiple specs.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">However, being more restrictive is fine here as it is a profile. <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Also, omission of details are allowed here since it after all refers back to the base specs. <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">In this respect, they look pretty good. <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">One thing that I noticed, which I should have noticed a long time ago, is that it is stating normative requirements to the Server even though it claims that it is only applicable to Client. I suppose that is still OK. <span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">That’s so the text can be the same. We say this in Section 1.1 of Basic and Implicit about this:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black">When the RFC 2119 language applies to the behavior of OpenID Providers, it is in this specification for explanatory value to help Client implementers
understand the expected behavior of OpenID Providers.</span><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">This concludes my final reviews. <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Thanks for putting in all the time. The specs are improved because of them.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D"> -- Mike<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">-- <br>
Nat Sakimura (=nat)<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Chairman, OpenID Foundation<br>
<a href="http://nat.sakimura.org/" target="_blank">http://nat.sakimura.org/</a><br>
@_nat_en<o:p></o:p></p>
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