[Openid-specs-ab] Issue #1835: SIOP: typos in draft 12, from Section 11 to Appendix D (openid/connect)
Takahiko Kawasaki
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Sun Feb 26 23:36:36 UTC 2023
New issue 1835: SIOP: typos in draft 12, from Section 11 to Appendix D
https://bitbucket.org/openid/connect/issues/1835/siop-typos-in-draft-12-from-section-11-to
Takahiko Kawasaki:
### 11.1. Self-Issued ID Token Validation, the 1st bullet
`iss`claims → `iss` Claim
// Insert a white space and change “claims” to “Claim”.
`sub`claim → `sub` claim
// Insert a white space.
### 11.2. Cross-Device Self-Issued ID Token Validation, the 3rd paragraph
Subject Syntax type → Subject Syntax Type
// Capitalize “t” in “type”.
### 13.1.2. Additional Data in Verifiable Presentations, the 1st paragraph
W3C Veriable Presentations → W3C Verifiable Presentations
// Change “Veriable” to “Verifiable”.
### 13.3. Usage of Cross-Device Self-Issued OP for Authentication, the 2nd paragraph
any Verfiable Presentations → any Verifiable Presentations
// Change “Verfiable” to “Verifiable”.
### 13.3. Usage of Cross-Device Self-Issued OP for Authentication, the 1st bullet
on a terminal devices → on a terminal device
// Change “devices” to “device”.
### 13.3. Usage of Cross-Device Self-Issued OP for Authentication, the 4th paragraph
Implementors → Implementers
// Change “o” to “e” for consistency.
### 13.4. Invocation using Private-Use URI Schemes \(Custom URL Schemes\), the 2nd paragraph
registers a custom URL scheme → registers a custom URI scheme
// Change “URL” to “URI”.
containing custom scheme → containing the custom URI scheme
// Insert “the” and “URI”.
### 13.4. Invocation using Private-Use URI Schemes \(Custom URL Schemes\), the 3rd paragraph
Implementors → Implementers
// Change “o” to “e” for consistency.
### 13.4. Invocation using Private-Use URI Schemes \(Custom URL Schemes\), the 4th paragraph
a HTTPS URI → an HTTPS URI
// Change “a” to “an”.
### 15.1. Static Configuration Values of the Self-Issued OPs, the 1st paragraph
two set → two sets
// Change “set” to “sets”.
### 15.1.2. A Set of Static Configuration Values bound to siopv2://, the 1st paragraph
custom URL scheme → custom URI scheme
// Change “URL” to “URI”.
### 15.1.3. A Set of Static Configuration Values bound to openid://, the 1st paragraph
custom URL scheme → custom URI scheme
// Change “URL” to “URI”.
### 15.3. Receiving Cross-Device Responses, the 1st paragraph
OPwill send → OP will send
// Insert a white space.
as a HTTP → as an HTTP
// Change “a” to “an”.
between Self-Issued OPand RP → between Self-Issued OP and RP
// Insert a white space.
Self-Issued OPresponses → Self-Issued OP responses
// Insert a white space.
### 16. Relationships to Other Documents, the 1st paragraph
this draft → this specification
// Change “draft” to “specification”.
### D.7. Cloud Wallet, the 1st paragraph
exchange date → exchange data
// Change “date” to “data”.
HTTPS protected connection → TLS protected connection
// Change “HTTPS” to “TLS”.
### D.7. Cloud Wallet, the 2nd paragraph
End-user authentication → End-User authentication
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