[Openid-specs-ab] Issue #1830: OpenID4VCI: typos in draft 11, from Section 7 to the end (openid/connect)

[Takahiko Kawasaki]

New issue 1830: OpenID4VCI: typos in draft 11, from Section 7 to the end
https://bitbucket.org/openid/connect/issues/1830/openid4vci-typos-in-draft-11-from-section

Takahiko Kawasaki:

### 7.2. Credential Request, the 2nd paragraph

conveyd → conveyed

// Change “conveyd” to “conveyed”.

### 11.1.4. Credential Lifecycle Management, the 1st paragraph

the Credential Issuer → The Credential Issuer

// Capitalize “t” of “the” at the beginning of the paragraph.

### 12.3. Multiple Accesses to the Credential Endpoint, the 2nd paragraph

the Credential Issuer → The Credential Issuer

// Capitalize “t” of “the” at the beginning of the paragraph.

is no longer be valid → is no longer valid

// Remove “be”.

### 12.4. Relationship between the Credential Issuer Identifier in the metadata and the Issuer Identifier in the Issued Credential, the 2nd list item

`{#credential-issuer-identifier}` → `(#credential-issuer-identifier)`

// Replace `{` and `}` with `(` and `)` so that the markdown can be processed as intended.

### D.2. Credential Offer - Cross-Device \(with information pre-submitted by the End-User\)

User scans the QR code → The End-User scans the QR code

// Change “User” to “The End-User”

### E.1.1.6. Credential Response, the 1st paragraph

MUST be a JSON string → MUST be a JWT

// Change “JSON string” to “JWT”.

### E.1.1.6. Credential Response, the example

`"format": "ldp_vc"` → `"format": "json_vc_jwt"`

// Change `"ldp_vc"` to `"json_vc_jwt"`.

### E.1.2.2. Credential Issuer Metadata, the 1st paragraph

Appendix E.1.3.2 apply → Appendix E.1.1.2 apply

// Change “E.1.3.2” to “E.1.1.2” \(if my guess is correct\).

### E.1.2.3. Credential Offer, the 1st paragraph

Appendix E.1.3.3 apply → Appendix E.1.1.3 apply

// Change “E.1.3.3” to “E.1.1.3” \(if my guess is correct\).

### E.1.2.4. Authorization Details, the 1st paragraph

Appendix E.1.3.3 apply → Appendix E.1.1.4 apply

// Change “E.1.3.3” to “E.1.1.4” \(if my guess is correct\).

### E.1.2.5. Credential Request, the 1st paragraph

Appendix E.1.3.5 apply → Appendix E.1.1.5 apply

// Change “E.1.3.5” to “E.1.1.5” \(if my guess is correct\).

### E.1.3.3. Credential Offer, the bullet for `@context`

Append a period at the end of the sentence.

### E.2.2. Credential Issuer Metadata, the example, display\[1\].locale

`"jp-JA"` → `"ja-JP"`

// Change `"jp-JA"` to `"ja-JP"`. “ja” means “Japanese” \(language\). “JP” means “Japan” \(country\).

### E.2.3. Credential Offer, the bullet for `doctype`

Append a period at the end of the sentence.

### E.2.4. Authorization Details, the bullet for `doctype`

Append a period at the end of the sentence.

### E.2.4. Authorization Details, the bullet for `claims`

Append a period at the end of the sentence.

### E.2.5. Credential Request, the bullet for `doctype`

Append a period at the end of the sentence.

### E.2.5. Credential Request, the bullet for `claims`

Append a period at the end of the sentence.

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