[Openid-specs-ab] Review of openid-connect-unmet-authentication-requirements-1_0-00

[Mike Jones]

I read https://openid.net/specs/openid-connect-unmet-authentication-requirements-1_0-00.html cover-to-cover.  My review comments follow.

Document title:  Add draft number.

Document identifier:  Change from "openid-connect-core-unmet-authentication-requirements-1_0" to  "openid-connect-unmet-authentication-requirements-1_0".

1. Authentication Error Definition: Add a reference to RFC 6749 to the first use of "OAuth 2.0".

1. Authentication Error Definition: Add a reference to [OpenID.Core] to the first use of "OpenID Connect Core".

1. Authentication Error Definition: Change "imposed by the Relying Party regarding" to "of the Relying Party for".  It will read more naturally that way.

1. Authentication Error Definition: Add a comma before "if appropriate".

3.  Normative References: Add the URL https://www.iana.org/assignments/oauth-parameters/oauth-parameters.xhtml to the OAuth Parameters Registry reference.

3.  Normative References: Replace the OpenID.Core reference with:
      <reference anchor="OpenID.Core">
        <front>
          <title>OpenID Connect Core 1.0</title>

          <author fullname="Nat Sakimura" initials="N." surname="Sakimura">
            <organization abbrev="NRI">Nomura Research Institute, Ltd.</organization>
          </author>

          <author fullname="John Bradley" initials="J." surname="Bradley">
            <organization abbrev="Ping Identity">Ping Identity</organization>
          </author>

          <author fullname="Michael B. Jones" initials="M.B." surname="Jones">
            <organization abbrev="Microsoft">Microsoft</organization>
          </author>

          <author fullname="Breno de Medeiros" initials="B." surname="de Medeiros">
            <organization abbrev="Google">Google</organization>
          </author>

                <author fullname="Chuck Mortimore" initials="C." surname="Mortimore">
                  <organization abbrev="Salesforce">Salesforce</organization>
                </author>

          <date day="8" month="November" year="2014"/>
        </front>

              <format target="http://openid.net/specs/openid-connect-core-1_0.html"
                type="HTML" />
      </reference>

Acknowledgments:  Change "Mike Jones" to "Michael B. Jones".

Document History:  The version you are identifying as -01 was published as working group version -00.  Please amend the history accordingly.

                                                       Thanks,
                                                       -- Mike


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