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<p class="MsoNormal">Comments on $B!H(BInternational Government Assurance Profile (iGov) for OAuth 2.0 - Draft 02$B!I(B
<a href="http://openid.net/specs/openid-igov-oauth2-1_0.html">http://openid.net/specs/openid-igov-oauth2-1_0.html</a>:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo1"><![if !supportLists]><span style="font-family:Symbol"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">·<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]>$B!x(B2.1.1 $B!H(BRequests to the Authorization Endpoint$B!I(B says clients "MUST include their full redirect URIs in the authorization request", but the example doesn't include it. The example has client_id, nonce, response_type and scope parameters;
not no redirect_uri.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo1"><![if !supportLists]><span style="font-family:Symbol"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">·<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]>$B!x(B2.1.1 It should also be $B!H(BURI$B!I(B singular (not $B!H(BURIs$B!I(B plural) as though a client might have multiple URIs registered, it can only include 1 in any particular request.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo1"><![if !supportLists]><span style="font-family:Symbol"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">·<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]>$B!x(B2.1.2 Example POST to /token doesn't include redirect_uri.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo1"><![if !supportLists]><span style="font-family:Symbol"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">·<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]>$B!x(B4.2 typo "acceept" $B"*(B "accept"<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Comments on <o:p></o:p></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><o:p> </o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">P.S. It is a pity it isn$B!G(Bt easy to comment on spec when their review periods and votes are announced to the whole OpenID Foundation. All members are asked to vote (and many are need to reach a quorum), but only those within the specific
working group can send email to its list. Or perhaps <a href="mailto:openid-general@lists.openid.net">
openid-general@lists.openid.net</a> is the right place for these sorts of comments from non-group members.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-fareast-language:EN-AU">--<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-fareast-language:EN-AU">James Manger<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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