+1 on the length.<br><br>I would also like to challenge the statement that OpenID is "more secure" than anything, without stating what is measured. (After all, OpenID is a protocol and not a mechanism, so weak username and password combos are still possible.)
<br><br>Hans<br><br><br><div><span class="gmail_quote">On 8/17/07, <b class="gmail_sendername">Marcin Jagodziński</b> <<a href="mailto:marcin.jagodzinski@gmail.com">marcin.jagodzinski@gmail.com</a>> wrote:</span><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="border-left: 1px solid rgb(204, 204, 204); margin: 0pt 0pt 0pt 0.8ex; padding-left: 1ex;">
David,<br><br>I'm not a native speaker, but:<br><br>1. Text is too long for me. It should be much shorter (1/3)<br><br>2. There should be one-sentence summary: but not: "OpenID is a way for<br>individuals to create identity online and use it anywhere OpenID is
<br>supported." (average reader will ask "why I should create identity<br>online?"). While I know that SSO is just one OpenID service, it's<br>something reader can understand easily, so it should be emphasized.
<br>And the largest websites supporting OpenID should be present, so that<br>reader would see that some webpage known to him actually uses OpenID<br><br>3. We should avoid acronyms "URI, HTTP, SSL" and cryptic names like
<br>"Diffie-Hellman" in first paragraph.<br><br>best regards,<br><br>2007/8/17, Recordon, David <<a href="mailto:drecordon@verisign.com">drecordon@verisign.com</a>>:<br>> Hey all,<br>> Spurred by yet another post
<br>> (<a href="http://miksovsky.blogs.com/flowstate/2007/08/openid-great-id.html">http://miksovsky.blogs.com/flowstate/2007/08/openid-great-id.html</a>) I<br>> decided to take some of the text Drummond and Kaliya had written and
<br>> merge it into the existing front page, rewriting a lot of it all. Not<br>> trying to say this is what it should say, but I think it is better than<br>> it was 5 minutes ago. Comments, suggestions, etc are definitely
<br>> appreciated and wanted!<br>><br>> CC'ing <a href="mailto:general@openid.net">general@openid.net</a> to reinforce that a marketing list now exists.<br>> <a href="http://openid.net/mailman/listinfo/marketing">
http://openid.net/mailman/listinfo/marketing</a><br>><br>> --David<br>> _______________________________________________<br>> general mailing list<br>> <a href="mailto:general@openid.net">general@openid.net</a>
<br>> <a href="http://openid.net/mailman/listinfo/general">http://openid.net/mailman/listinfo/general</a><br>><br><br><br>--<br>Marcin Jagodziński<br><a href="http://marcin.jagodzinski.waw.pl/">http://marcin.jagodzinski.waw.pl/
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