<div dir="ltr">Based on today's call, there were no other errata changes requested by the work group before submitting for Implementer's Draft.<div><br></div><div>Mike, unless you have more feedback on the draft, I'd formally like to ask you to submit these specs for a vote for Implementer's Draft.</div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Tue, Apr 24, 2018 at 6:56 PM, Marius Scurtescu <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:mscurtescu@google.com" target="_blank">mscurtescu@google.com</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir="ltr"><div class="gmail_extra">Comments inline...</div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote"><span class="">On Mon, Apr 23, 2018 at 5:15 PM, Mike Jones via Openid-specs-risc <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:openid-specs-risc@lists.openid.net" class="m_1872446593505490309cremed" target="_blank">openid-specs-risc@lists.<wbr>openid.net</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">





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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#002060">Based a quick skim wearing my foundation secretary hat, I need the following things to get these ready to post:<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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Rename risc-secevent to openid-risc-secevent-1_0</li></ul></div></div></blockquote></span><div>renamed to openid-risc-profile-1_0, see bellow</div><div><br></div><div> </div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div lang="EN-US" link="blue" vlink="purple"><div class="m_1872446593505490309m_5097318386675812302WordSection1"><ul style="margin-top:0in" type="disc"><li class="m_1872446593505490309m_5097318386675812302MsoListParagraph" style="color:#002060;margin-left:0in"><u></u><u></u></li><li class="m_1872446593505490309m_5097318386675812302MsoListParagraph" style="color:#002060;margin-left:0in">
Rename risc-event-types to openid-risc-event-types-1_0</li></ul></div></div></blockquote><div>done</div><div><br></div><div> </div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div lang="EN-US" link="blue" vlink="purple"><div class="m_1872446593505490309m_5097318386675812302WordSection1"><ul style="margin-top:0in" type="disc"><li class="m_1872446593505490309m_5097318386675812302MsoListParagraph" style="color:#002060;margin-left:0in"><u></u><u></u></li><li class="m_1872446593505490309m_5097318386675812302MsoListParagraph" style="color:#002060;margin-left:0in">
Rename oauth-event-types to oauth-event-types_1_0</li></ul></div></div></blockquote><div>done</div><span class=""><div><br></div><div> </div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div lang="EN-US" link="blue" vlink="purple"><div class="m_1872446593505490309m_5097318386675812302WordSection1"><ul style="margin-top:0in" type="disc"><li class="m_1872446593505490309m_5097318386675812302MsoListParagraph" style="color:#002060;margin-left:0in"><u></u><u></u></li><li class="m_1872446593505490309m_5097318386675812302MsoListParagraph" style="color:#002060;margin-left:0in">
Provide the openid-risc-profile-1_0 to also post</li></ul></div></div></blockquote></span><div>sorry about the confusion, that was risc-secevent, renamed to openid-risc-profile-1_0</div><span class=""><div><br></div><div> </div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div lang="EN-US" link="blue" vlink="purple"><div class="m_1872446593505490309m_5097318386675812302WordSection1"><ul style="margin-top:0in" type="disc"><li class="m_1872446593505490309m_5097318386675812302MsoListParagraph" style="color:#002060;margin-left:0in"><u></u><u></u></li><li class="m_1872446593505490309m_5097318386675812302MsoListParagraph" style="color:#002060;margin-left:0in">
Add “1.0” to the end of each of the spec titles.</li></ul></div></div></blockquote></span><div>done</div><span class=""><div><br></div><div> </div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div lang="EN-US" link="blue" vlink="purple"><div class="m_1872446593505490309m_5097318386675812302WordSection1"><ul style="margin-top:0in" type="disc"><li class="m_1872446593505490309m_5097318386675812302MsoListParagraph" style="color:#002060;margin-left:0in"><u></u><u></u></li><li class="m_1872446593505490309m_5097318386675812302MsoListParagraph" style="color:#002060;margin-left:0in">
Optionally, also prefix the first two spec titles with “OpenID”, such as “OpenID RISC Event Types 1.0”.</li></ul></div></div></blockquote></span><div>done</div><span class=""><div><br></div><div> </div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div lang="EN-US" link="blue" vlink="purple"><div class="m_1872446593505490309m_5097318386675812302WordSection1"><ul style="margin-top:0in" type="disc"><li class="m_1872446593505490309m_5097318386675812302MsoListParagraph" style="color:#002060;margin-left:0in"><u></u><u></u></li><li class="m_1872446593505490309m_5097318386675812302MsoListParagraph" style="color:#002060;margin-left:0in">
Include a URL for any specification references.  For instance, the RISC-PROFILE should include the URL “<a href="http://openid.net/specs/openid-risc-profile-1_0.html" class="m_1872446593505490309cremed" target="_blank">http://openid.net/specs/openi<wbr>d-risc-profile-1_0.html</a>”.</li></ul></div></div></blockquote></span><div>done</div><span class=""><div><br></div><div> </div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div lang="EN-US" link="blue" vlink="purple"><div class="m_1872446593505490309m_5097318386675812302WordSection1"><ul style="margin-top:0in" type="disc"><li class="m_1872446593505490309m_5097318386675812302MsoListParagraph" style="color:#002060;margin-left:0in"><u></u><u></u></li><li class="m_1872446593505490309m_5097318386675812302MsoListParagraph" style="color:#002060;margin-left:0in">
Include dates and authors in all specification references – both for the WG specs and for IETF specs.  For instance, the SET reference is missing the data and author information (and the URL).</li></ul></div></div></blockquote></span><div>done</div><span class=""><div><br></div><div> </div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div lang="EN-US" link="blue" vlink="purple"><div class="m_1872446593505490309m_5097318386675812302WordSection1"><ul style="margin-top:0in" type="disc"><li class="m_1872446593505490309m_5097318386675812302MsoListParagraph" style="color:#002060;margin-left:0in"><u></u><u></u></li><li class="m_1872446593505490309m_5097318386675812302MsoListParagraph" style="color:#002060;margin-left:0in">
Run a spelling and grammar check.  For instance, I’m sure you didn’t mean to say “This document defines the RTISC Event Types”.</li></ul></div></div></blockquote></span><div>done</div><span class=""><div><br></div><div> </div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div lang="EN-US" link="blue" vlink="purple"><div class="m_1872446593505490309m_5097318386675812302WordSection1"><ul style="margin-top:0in" type="disc"><li class="m_1872446593505490309m_5097318386675812302MsoListParagraph" style="color:#002060;margin-left:0in"><u></u><u></u></li><li class="m_1872446593505490309m_5097318386675812302MsoListParagraph" style="color:#002060;margin-left:0in">
Provide a copy of the primary source documents for each of the specifications (the .xml files) as well as the .txt and .html output from xml2rfc that you intend for me to post at http:/<a href="http://openid.net/specs/" class="m_1872446593505490309cremed" target="_blank">openid.net/specs/</a>.  If you’re using MarkDown, please also provide me the
 .md files and the procedure you use to convert the .md files to .xml.  I may verify that they build correctly.</li></ul></div></div></blockquote></span><div>Attached</div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div>Thanks a lot Mike!</div><div> </div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><span class=""><div lang="EN-US" link="blue" vlink="purple"><div class="m_1872446593505490309m_5097318386675812302WordSection1"><ul style="margin-top:0in" type="disc"><li class="m_1872446593505490309m_5097318386675812302MsoListParagraph" style="color:#002060;margin-left:0in"><u></u><u></u></li></ul>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b>From:</b> Adam Dawes <<a href="mailto:adawes@google.com" class="m_1872446593505490309cremed" target="_blank">adawes@google.com</a>> <br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday, April 23, 2018 3:49 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Mike Jones <<a href="mailto:Michael.Jones@microsoft.com" class="m_1872446593505490309cremed" target="_blank">Michael.Jones@microsoft.com</a>><br>
<b>Cc:</b> Dick Hardt via Openid-specs-risc <<a href="mailto:openid-specs-risc@lists.openid.net" class="m_1872446593505490309cremed" target="_blank">openid-specs-risc@lists.openi<wbr>d.net</a>><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Request for vote on RISC Implementer's Draft<u></u><u></u></p><div><div class="m_1872446593505490309h5">
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<p class="MsoNormal">This is a formal request from the RISC working group to call a vote to make the following specs implementers draft:<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><a href="https://bitbucket.org/openid/risc/src/98ade8086b82c080e1bcd2060252c20116b44009/risc-secevent.txt?at=master&fileviewer=file-view-default" class="m_1872446593505490309cremed" target="_blank">RISC secevents</a><u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><a href="https://bitbucket.org/openid/risc/src/98ade8086b82c080e1bcd2060252c20116b44009/risc-event-types.txt?at=master&fileviewer=file-view-default" class="m_1872446593505490309cremed" target="_blank">RISC event types</a><u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">As per our conversation last week, you said that you would review the drafts this week for proper formatting/references/etc and would likely come back with changes before issuing the specs for a vote. <u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">The group wanted to take next week's call, 4/30 @9:30, to run through the errata changes and lock them down. Would be ideal if you can attend as well.<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Please let me know if you have any other questions.<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">thanks,<u></u><u></u></p>
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