[Openid-specs-mobile-profile] minor remarks for draft_mobile-authentication-01.txt

John Bradley ve7jtb at ve7jtb.com
Wed Feb 10 21:38:17 UTC 2016


I did these edits.

> On Feb 10, 2016, at 1:38 PM, philippe.clement at orange.com wrote:
> 
> Hi John,
>  
> Here are some minor remarks on the authentication doc: ( https://bitbucket.org/openid/mobile/src/71b7c20f7decbabd2f36a6c1b0082a5ef7f05ffe/draft-mobile-authentication-01.txt?at=default&fileviewer=file-view-default <https://bitbucket.org/openid/mobile/src/71b7c20f7decbabd2f36a6c1b0082a5ef7f05ffe/draft-mobile-authentication-01.txt?at=default&fileviewer=file-view-default> )
>  
> Line 25: added “token”
> “In addition, the profile will specify an encrypted login hint token to…”
>  
> Line 229: remove “as a”
> “The OP MUST support receiving "acr" as a as a claim request…”
>  
> Line 341-343: remove duplicated paragraph
> “The Authorization server may produce "login_hint_token" tokens in
>  <>   other formats for use in Account Chooser or other discovery profiles,
>  <>   as long as they are confidentiality protected from the client.”
>  
> Kind regards,
> Philippe
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