[Openid-specs-ab] Review of Multiple Response Type Encoding Practices

Mike Jones Michael.Jones at microsoft.com
Tue Dec 17 22:58:44 UTC 2013


Thanks, George.  Comments applied at http://openid.bitbucket.org/.

1.2 - Was previously deleted, since unnecessary and confusing.

2 - Overly redundant - already spelled out earlier in the paragraph.

                                                            -- Mike

From: openid-specs-ab-bounces at lists.openid.net [mailto:openid-specs-ab-bounces at lists.openid.net] On Behalf Of George Fletcher
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Subject: [Openid-specs-ab] Review of Multiple Response Type Encoding Practices

Section 1.2
  Client and Server --
     Editorial:
           "the client requests an access restricted resource (Protected Resource) on the server"
     recommend....
          "the client requests access to a restricted resource (Protected Resource) on the server"

     Question: " by authenticating with the server using the Resource Owner's credentials."
            Are we trying to describe the pre-OAuth2 model? Or just that the client obtains authorization to access the Protected Resource often using the Resource Owner's credentials?

Section 2
  Should we explicitly spell out response_mode in the last sentence as in ... "if no Response Mode is specified using the 'response_mode' request parameter? Or is that overly redundant?

Section 2.1 : response_mode
  Second sentence: I find this a little confusing. Maybe... "The use of this parameter is NOT RECOMMENDED when the Response Mode value is the same as the default Response Mode value specified by the Response Type."

Section 2.2: second paragraph, first sentence
  "The all parameters" I think should be just "All parameters..."

Otherwise, looks good!

Thanks,
George

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